原意是：我应该昨天做值日报告，但是因为某些原因无法做，老师让我站在教室后面，我因为不服气而把书摔在了桌子上，弄出了不小的噪音……
Today is Thursday, March 4, 2009, and the weather is sunny. I’ll give you report.
Yesterday, you know, I made a really bad mistake.
At that moment, in fact I would give you my report, but on last Friday, I couldn’t find it. So I wanted rewrite again and explained why I couldn’t.
But I didn’t rewrite on time and explained in a wrong place. And I was asked to stand on the back of classroom.
It was wrong to put books on the desk with a big noise. I didn’t respect teacher. And It also affected everyone in the classroom.
So I feel very sorry to my teacher and my classmates. I hope that you can excuse me.
I’m sorry.
Today is Thursday, March 4, 2009 and it is sunny. I’ll give you a report.
Yesterday, you know, I made a really big（或serious） mistake.
At that moment, in fact I would give you my report, but on last Friday, I couldn’t find it. So I wanted to rewrite and explained why I couldn’t.
But I didn’t rewrite on time and explained in a wrong place. And I was asked to stand on the back of classroom.
It was wrong to put books on the desk with big noise. I didn’t respect the teacher. And It also affected everyone in the classroom.
So I feel very sorry to my teacher and my classmates. I hope that you can excuse me.
I’m sorry.
注：1、the weather is sunny是汉语式英语。天气好应当是it is sunny，it表示天气。
2、I’ll give you a report. report为可数名词，前面要加a
3、一个严重的错误，应当说a big（或serious）mistake
4、I wanted rewrite again 应当改为I wanted to rewrite 或I wanted to write again 。因为want作想讲时，后面一定加不定式；rewrite本来就是塌态梁“重新写、再次写”的意团运思，再加again重复。
5、a big noise应当去年a，因为noise是不可数名词
6、respect teacher中的teacher前加the，因为：1老师是可数名词；闭厅2、你特指的是让你站的老师
看的真别扭啊物高链！改念橘一改罩孙口气吧！
I did a serious mistake yesterday therefore I am going to say sorry about that.