It was when I was an university student that I did a lot OF traveling abroad.One day ,encouraged by a professor who said,"Now is the time for you to travel around the world , enrich your knowledge through ACTUAL experiences and HAVE fun!"I decided to do as told to.However, I had done most of my traveling through the Internet after I started to work for a food company.By using the Internet ,I have not only seen the sights of many cities on THE computer screen,but also got information about food in different COUNTRIES,As information technology DEVELOPS,one might be able to do so WITHOUT making real trips.
需要改正的都用大写给你指斗标出了，有的是要加一个词，有的是把档派错的改正了，你自己仔细比唯蠢磨对一下吧。请放心采用。
It was my university time that I did a lot of traveling abroad.
One day ,encouraged by a professor who said,"Now, it's time for you to travel around the world , enrich your knowledge through your actual experiences and have fun!"
I decided to do as he told us to.
However, I had done most of my traveling on the Internet after I worked for a food company.
By using the Internet ,I have not only seen the sights of many cities ,but also got information about the food in different countries.
As information technology develops,one might be able to expand his horizons without making real trips.
文章总虚肢历体不错，立意较新，但略有瑕疵。所改之处均以大饥兆写标出，仅供参考：差搜
It was when I was A university student that I did a lot OF traveling abroad.One day ,encouraged by a professor who said,"Now is the time for you to travel around the world , AND enrich your knowledge through ACTUAL experiences and having fun!"I decided to do as WHAT I WAS told .However, I had done most of my traveling through the Internet after I started to work for a food company.By using the Internet ,I have not only seen the sights of many cities on THE computer screen,but also got information about food in different COUNTRIES,As information technology DEVELOPING,one might be able to do so ONLINE RATHER THAN making real trips.
It was去掉，稿野祥said改had said，键搏now is改now it is，enrich加ing，脊简told to前加had，country用复数，develop加s，