1.现在网上
购物已成为一种
时尚 2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3.我的建议
When it comes to _____, different people may retain different views.
Some people say that ___ is a good thing. They point out that __________. They also claim that __________. Thus, they suggest that __________.
On the other hand, there are many people who say that _____. They maintain that__________. They also say that__________. In addition, they argue that __________.
From my own perspective, both sides hold some water. But I am of the opinion that we should _______.
When it comes to be a fashion, different people may retain different views.
Some people say that shooping in internet is a good thing. They point out that it's very convinient, people could do shopping at home. They also claim that it contains much more information in internet than a shopping store. People could easily compare items in different stores. Thus, they suggest that we should develop internet shoppings more quickly and widely.
On the other hand, there are many people who say that it's not safe in internet, for there are many fake goods. They maintain that internet shopping will never succeed traditional stores. They also say that those people who do shopping in internet will regret when they find out that they bought fake goods. In addition, they argue that when people use internet payment, the internet criminals have more chance to get money illegally.
From my own perspective, both sides hold some water. But I'm of the opinion that we should develop internet shopping more quickly and widely.